amader katha
bhasahin prithibir janno kothao akta duyar khule ache.amra akhono dekhte pai ni.tabu chale ei kabita bhraman.dure adure...rakhe na chap tar payer hater.
amader ghuri chepeche...barsateo.ador akta manuser daknam.lekha akta ghumer halud.
kothay kakhon kar paye juto chare jabe kaou jane na.ke hathat ase balbe dakho oi 1000fit niche je rekha gariye jache tar jannoi beje othe gan kabita bhalobasa...basi sudhu kabitai bhalobasi eso ajiban
duranto ek pothhaNtar shuru.
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tin joner kobitei khub bhalo laglo.
aro bhalo lekha asuk.
egiye choluk.
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